Thursday, July 31, 2008

white yet dark

don't really like this poem much, but i wrote it, so i decided 2 put it up anyway.

It came in a letter,
White yet dark,
This won’t ever get better,
Its left a permanent mark,

Stabbing your heart,
Again and again,
It rips you apart,
It always wins in the end,

A heartless fiend,
Killing at all costs,
Nobody intervened,
Now all is lost,

My death is now,
I don’t really mind,
Its something I can allow,
Now I wont be confined.


ok so i like this 1, its happy my first happy poem!!!! inspired by the song Your guardian Angel by Red Jumpsuit Apparatus


I will be there for you,
I’ll always care for you,
I’ll never let you fall,
My little baby doll,

I’ll love you forever,
You make me better,

Be there for me,
And I’ll be there for you,
Come and see,
If only you knew,

My love for you is strong,
It’ll never go wrong,
I’ll get you through the hardest parts,
Before the pain ever starts,

Follow me,
I know the way,
Come and see,
It’ll be okay.

8 comments:

Katrina :) said...

Wow that's really good!

I saw you love twilight...are you going to the release party tomorrow? I so am! lol

U need to read Blue Bloods...it's good and it's about vampires...not as good as twilight, but still good!

I write Songs, not poems, but it's really all the same, songs just have music and you sing them! LOL!

that one was really good!

:)

Trina

Sara Bear :) said...

nice poems!

GiGi said...

Wow I think you have so much potential!!! Keep writing I enjoy your poems so so much!!

lone poet said...

thanx gigi!!!

turnabout said...

I love them both! (as always haha) You're just as good at writing 'happy' poems as you are at writing sad ones.

Anonymous said...

I love both of them! Your Gaurdian Angel makes me cry...I love that song!

lone poet said...

i just found out that 'gigi' is my mother ha, i guess its a good thing, well it IS a good thing that way, wen i'm at my dads, i can talk 2 her more.

Yukio said...

I don't know what I did July 4th...although I could just look back at my blog and find out.