Sunday, July 20, 2008

Fallen Angel

this poem doesnt flow, but i like it, not because i think its written well, cuz its not, but because i wrote this about someone special, its really not finnished, but i can't finnish it, everytime i try... i can't describe her right and her story was never finnished so, maybe someday i'll be able 2 finnish this one.

Though I’m not Christian,
I believe fallen angels are true,
Because there was a mission,
To help people like you,

You’re beautiful, you’re sweet,
You’re a pleasure to meet,
You’re special, you’re pure,
You’re the perfect cure,

You fixed scared hearts,
With only your love,
But you broke apart,
Now you fly up higher than the doves,

Fallen angels are true,
That fallen angel was you

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

OMG! that ones awesome!

lone poet said...

thanx