so 4 the last few years i have questoined if there was a god. and a few days ago i just started writing, just like always, waiting 4 some insperation, and i had been thinking about a conversation i was having on this site with aivilo relluf. a conversation about higher powers and stuff like that, so i just kinda wrote 2 senteces and the rest just kinda... showed up on the page. i mean, yes, i wrote it, but i wasnt thinking about the poem really, its weird, so its a weird poem, it doesnt all rhyme, but its got some of my views about religion in there. not just death and murder like my usual stuff :P anyway, hope u enjoy it, or at least find it interesting ar amusing, o wait, speaking of amusing, it has the word Muse in it, if u still havent heard those songs... GET 2 IT, I'M NOT KIDDING YA'LL lol and wish me luck at the rodeo 2nite please, i'll need it, :)
Does life ever end?
Do we really die?
Does heaven exist?
Or is it a lie?
If there is a god,
Where is he now?
Has he left?
And if so, then how?
Can he hear when we pray?
Does he really listen to us?
If we don't believe,
Does he really send us away?
If there is a devil,
Is he truly bad?
Or can he not help it?
Is he just sad?
Does he want revenge?
Did god do him wrong?
Was it a mistake?
Where does his poor soul truly belong?
How can I believe?
My faith is not there,
I guess I'll see when I leave,
I'll wait till then to care.
Friday, September 5, 2008
is there really a god?
Posted by lone poet at 4:08 PM
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Wow. That's deep -- and I really like the poem. I think there's just the positive and negative energy of everyone in the world. Energy can be manipulated so that explains such things as demons, angels and people who can speak to the dead.
interestin poem...
havent i ever told u that im in a muse cover band... oh. well i am :) hope the rodeo goes well... and stuff guitar, yu've got a voila. Time is runnin out pfft... well, at least it is muse
Woah! That was the longest comment I have ever received. I had finally saved up enough for an album! So I went out and bought it and its good. I think i'll write about it now... nighty nite :)
That was a really amazing and deep and thoughtful poem. (Are you kinding me it was AMAZING AND GREAT ANd WOWING ANd OME I'm at a lose for words. I don't have one poetic bone in my body)
Really I deeply believe in my faith. I'm Catholic, and really believe there is a God and that he is good and is always watching us. I have a poem in my Inspirational Blog called Footprints. I read it every time I start to doubt God. It may intreast you...it may not. (I didn't write it by the way) But ya.
Hey I'm praying that tonight goes well with the Rodeo. :) Good luck!
Do you you have one on myspace? I thought you did, so its exactally the same as that. Then to put it on you blog you copy the code, then go to 'layout' on your dashboard page, then click on 'add a gadget'. Then scroll down and click on the one that says 'HTML/Javascript', then just paste the code for your playlist under the content.
Oh, and btw, great poem! And congratulations again on getting 19 something at the rodeo! =)
hey that sucks,... have fun with the rodeo though...yeah my best friend moved a few years ago to texas,.. he was the only kid able to make me laugh till i cried in fact he did it everyday...
hmmm. that's an interesting poem. i like it. good luck with the rodeo even though it's saturday now and it's over! i'll talk to you later. bye.
-Christine♥
Ur welcome =) and i was looking through ur earlier posts and i found the 1st chapter of your book-you need to post more of it! it is soooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! U have to post more! and you have 2 promise me that u will hand me and austin a copy when ur done at the same time-he can NOT finish it b4 i do ha =)
Strange - usually when I'm tired I type shorter comments. Actually, when I'm tired, I'm in bed so I wouldn't really know if I'd make a lengthy comment or not. All well :)
Im not gonna post my email but i will text it 2 u (and u do have my email address its in your purse, remember? =) and of course ill help u, but im a horrible decision maker! i can never decide on anything, sorry, but i promise ill help :)
Hey. Well, you don't know me, obviously, but you're blog is linked to my friend's blog so I saw yours. I really do believe there is a God because I'm Christian. I go to church every Sunday. I asked God into my heart when i was 6. It's not easy to be Christian. Some people think that there are too many rules, but there really aren't any rules, just things to do that will please God. I know this might be wierd since you don't know me. Maybe this will help prove to you that there is a God: Look at the stars. How can you not think that there is a higher power when you look at the stars? It's incredible. There is so much proof that there is a God, and it's all in the Bible. Might I suggest that you go to www.biblegateway.com. You can search keywords and some verses will come up. I will pray that this will help. I'm not saying that you HAVE to become a Christian, but I just want to encourage you. Having Christ is your ticket to Heaven. If you choose to have Him in your heart, just pray a simple prayer, asking just that. He might not answer all prayers the way you want Him to, but the answer to that prayer will ALWAYS be yes!
Heya =]
Thanks for your comment on my blog about how people change. It was really good to see that my thoughts reached people.
This blog of your's is brilliant. I have never believed in god and all these questions were exactly my reasons. I really liked your point about the devil.
In my religious studies lessons recently we've been doing about good and evil and the devil came into that so thank you! You've helped me with my work! =] I think that there is so much scientific evidence that go against the Christian teachings. Although, that's not to say that I think they're all stupid. I'm willing to hear their ideas.
Anyway, thanks again for your comment. I hope you comment on my others in the future =]
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